May 6, 2017

DNF Review: Flame in the Mist

Flame in the Mist by Renee Ahdieh
Grade: DNF
An e-galley was provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
Summary: The daughter of a prominent samurai, Mariko has long known her place—she may be an accomplished alchemist, whose cunning rivals that of her brother Kenshin, but because she is not a boy, her future has always been out of her hands. At just seventeen years old, Mariko is promised to Minamoto Raiden, the son of the emperor's favorite consort—a political marriage that will elevate her family's standing. But en route to the imperial city of Inako, Mariko narrowly escapes a bloody ambush by a dangerous gang of bandits known as the Black Clan, who she learns has been hired to kill her before she reaches the palace.

Dressed as a peasant boy, Mariko sets out to infiltrate the ranks of the Black Clan, determined to track down the person responsible for the target on her back. But she's quickly captured and taken to the Black Clan’s secret hideout, where she meets their leader, the rebel ronin Takeda Ranmaru, and his second-in-command, his best friend Okami. Still believing her to be a boy, Ranmaru and Okami eventually warm to Mariko, impressed by her intellect and ingenuity. As Mariko gets closer to the Black Clan, she uncovers a dark history of secrets, of betrayal and murder, which will force her to question everything she's ever known.

The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly: This is going to be a little different than my usual DNF reviews. The main reason I DNFed was because I was forced to read my e-galley of Flame in the Mist on my computer, because First to Read does not have a "send to Kindle" option. I have an Adobe Digital Editions app, but every time I tried to access the book through that, I was told I didn't have access to it. So I was forced to try and read it on my computer, which is not an enjoyable experience.
The writing was very slow. The worldbuilding and backstories felt sparse, and I kept mixing up characters because I couldn't remember who was who beyond Mariko. I wanted to love the setting (so few books are set in Japan, or a fantasy land reminiscent of Japan), but the setting didn't come alive.

The Verdict: I'm going to try this one again at a later date. Hopefully being able to read a physical copy will improve the experience.

Will I be adding this book to my library?: Not at the moment.

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